Monday, 17 January 2011

Script One

This first script has a few grammar errors alongside some structural problems such as characters names not being in capital letters and their ages not being included. It also has a few problems with dialogue where the speech didn't seem to fit the synopsis correctly or it just didn't flow well.
However, overall this first script hasn't got that many problems with it and so therefore will be used as the structure for my next draft.

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